Your hook is not bad, but the content is.
If you're not getting enough engagement, you might be making this mistake.
Hereโs the solution in just two points:
โณ Address the person (it can be you, your audience, or any specific name if relevant).
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The Economy vs. Our Well-Being: A Personal Take
A few months ago, a friend in finance told me, "A cyclist is a disaster for the economy." I laughed, but then he explained:
๐ No car loans, no EMIs, no fuel purchasesโbad for banks & oil companies.
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Arcane
Hey, I'm on Medialย โขย 7m
The rebranding "worked" for Jaguar :)
Maybe there's no such thing as bad publicity?