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AVIRAL JAIN
Hey I am on Medial • 2m
Remove the first line, especially the "one at a time" thing (Saaf pata chal rha hai ki chatgpt ne likha hai, chatgpt har jagah one at a time chipka deta h 😒) Add and highlight the customization feature (not just color and design but also shape, cuts and texture) specially when you are planning to work for cafes and events (it is the main feature you should consider when you are planning about B2B business) Also when we think about Indian market, environmental issues here are just 'concern' not the 'mandate'. So the last line needs to revised too. Also, if possible, try to add any figure or data like existing packaging and disposal cup market, trend or shift from plastic to paper in last five years etc. numbers makes the pitch more attentive
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