Hey I am on MedialĀ ā¢Ā 1m
umm...what should I say...I think you really need to make your pitch in your own words because right now u are talking like a machine kinda...you should add some emotions in it..like when the main problem part is coming you have to emphasize on it like this is the biggest goddamn problem and not a very simple one and when the solution part comes you emphasize more that WE are the one with he solution and WE have the solution which will make more impact on the investor....just remember that the investor never invests in the company just for the sake of investment...HE ACTUALLY INVESTS IN THE TEAM...so the investor should be convinced that you are the MAN who will do it cause he will invest in YOU not the company as at the end it is YOU who is THE COMPANY..if you get what I mean.
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