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Tbh, I would say the first one is better because in that, the call to action buttons, here the start free trial will be more noticeable by the end user. Also, the message is more clear in the first one. I can just read the main title and the rest flows in smoothly. But the navbar and all looks better in the second one. Keep trying and improving! 🙌

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Before is less confusing. After is cute

After

Are you ux ui designer

I wish in right side the font opacity should not be decreased ,then I would be nice

Second can be a lot Better if there is some fade in right side and there's very less free space

After

Before is very precise

2nd one has a lot of inconsistencies like spaces between words, font size, font color and font style. It looks good for a beginner

After

2nd one is Better

Noice, both are fine tbh but I am waiting for the third iteration.

New one is good.

Before looks cleaner but it also looks like you're a newbie in this. The new one is great.

After is better

After looks good but according to me both are best 👏🏻